E9 - If you don't make up your mind, the story won't advance
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SIGN Tomozaki
[00:04] Tomozaki
"You thought I meant I liked
you that way, didn't you!"
[00:07] Tomozaki
"I actually do like you that way."
[00:11] Tomozaki
Who, a bottom-tier character like me?
[00:14] Tomozaki
This calls for some top-tier assistance.
SIGN Aoi Hinami
[00:19] Tomozaki
I guess I'll have to go
to Hinami for advice...
SIGN Takehiro Mizusawa: Sorry, Fumiya. Can you come to work? Someone called in sick.
SIGN Takehiro Mizusawa: Sorry, Fumiya. Can you come to work? Someone called in sick.
[00:25] Tomozaki
Mizusawa?
SIGN 2nd Stage: Lv. 9 If you don't make up your mind, the story won't advance
[02:02] Mizusawa
Sorry for the short notice.
[02:04] Mizusawa
This is a big help.
[02:05] Tomozaki
Sure.
[02:07] Mizusawa
What's wrong, Fumiya?
[02:09] Tomozaki
It's not like I can tell him about Mimimi.
[02:13] Mizusawa
Aha! Girl trouble, perhaps?
[02:18] Mizusawa
Hey, I got it right.
[02:20] Mizusawa
So were you dumped? Did you jump
the gun on confessing your love?
[02:25] Tomozaki
Dumped? No, not dumped...
[02:28] Mizusawa
Oh? Then did someone open up to you?
[02:31] Mizusawa
You've been spending a lot of
time alone with Kikuchi lately.
[02:34] Tomozaki
Huh? Kikuchi?
[02:37] Mizusawa
No?
[02:39] Tomozaki
Uh... no...
[02:42] Mizusawa
Hmm... Then that means...
[02:45] Mizusawa
the other possibility would be...
[02:49] Mizusawa
Mimimi?
[02:51] Mizusawa
Whoa, seriously? Mimimi?
[02:56] Mizusawa
Hmm.
[02:57] Mizusawa
I see.
[03:00] Mizusawa
So what's got you confused?
[03:02] Tomozaki
I don't even know if it counts
as a confession, for one.
[03:07] Mizusawa
It's hard to say.
[03:10] Mizusawa
Could be a confession, or
she could be playing games.
[03:14] Tomozaki
Games...
[03:16] Mizusawa
If you want to continue the
relationship you've had so far,
[03:19] Mizusawa
you can totally go on
as if nothing happened.
[03:23] Tomozaki
I-I can, huh?
[03:25] Mizusawa
Although I would say that...
[03:27] Mizusawa
if you wanted to date her in this
situation, you can probably do that, too.
[03:33] Tomozaki
What?!
[03:34] Mizusawa
Keep it down!
[03:36] Tomozaki
S-Sorry...
[03:38] Mizusawa
But yeah, I can see why
she'd be feeling the heat.
[03:42] Mizusawa
What's that mean?
[03:44] Mizusawa
Remember? Attractive guys attract people.
[03:48] Mizusawa
Mimimi's probably fretting about
you getting snapped up by Kikuchi
[03:55] Mizusawa
or someone at the girls' school.
[03:57] Mizusawa
Y-Yeah, but even if I did get snapped up,
[04:00] Mizusawa
there are plenty of other options...
[04:02] Mizusawa
Listen.
[04:04] Mizusawa
When are you going to quit
with that masochistic crap?
[04:07] Mizusawa
You're just wielding your
weakness as an excuse
[04:10] Mizusawa
so you don't have to acknowledge
anyone's expectations or goodwill,
[04:14] Mizusawa
and it's a terrible habit.
[04:16] Mizusawa
Haven't you noticed?
[04:18] Mizusawa
Whenever you're putting yourself
down, you look almost relieved.
[04:24] Mizusawa
Don't do that.
[04:27] Mizusawa
A truly cool guy is only relieved
[04:30] Mizusawa
after raising the bar for himself,
then eagerly putting in the work
[04:35] Mizusawa
to be able to clear it.
[04:38] Mizusawa
I mean, honestly, you're free
to keep denigrating yourself.
[04:42] Mizusawa
I don't care either way.
[04:43] Mizusawa
But when you put yourself down,
[04:47] Mizusawa
it upsets the people who like you.
[04:59] Tomozaki
I guess I am an undisputed bottom-tier
character in this game called life.
[05:04] Tomozaki
I go on about truth and sincerity while
using my own weakness as an excuse,
[05:09] Tomozaki
shutting down my thoughts with "No one
would ever choose the likes of me."
[05:13] Tomozaki
But maybe I knew that, somewhere deep down.
[05:18] Tomozaki
Maybe I was just pretending not to notice.
[05:21] Tomozaki
Which is exactly why I'm
going to voice this truth
[05:26] Tomozaki
in the realest sense of the word:
[05:29] Tomozaki
Yes, Minami Nanami...
[05:34] Tomozaki
She... she likes me.
SIGN Sewing Room 2
[05:40] Aoi
Now then,
SIGN Today's Task: Decide who you want to get closer to
[05:41] Aoi
you've chosen your two or
more girls to pursue, yes?
SIGN Small Goal: Who do you want to get closer to?
[05:47] Tomozaki
Can I ask you something, Hinami?
[05:50] Aoi
What?
[05:51] Tomozaki
What does it mean to... to fall for someone?
[05:56] Aoi
How can you ask something so
embarrassing with a straight face?
[05:59] Tomozaki
S-Stop it. I was doing fine
till you said something.
[06:04] Aoi
Well, if we look at it analytically...
[06:07] Aoi
It's when reliance, lust, possessiveness,
and interest coincide.
[06:13] Aoi
Precisely speaking, it would be an emotion
[06:17] Aoi
made up of a combination of these factors.
[06:19] Tomozaki
No, I mean in a more individual way.
[06:23] Tomozaki
Something like... who do I like?
[06:27] Tomozaki
How do I even know how to tell?
[06:33] Aoi
Are you still going on about that?
[06:35] Tomozaki
I do want to make up my mind,
[06:38] Tomozaki
but I can't yet. Or something.
[06:41] Aoi
See, this is why you need to
choose two or more people.
[06:46] Aoi
You honestly can't decide, yet you're
compelled to narrow it down to just one.
[06:51] Aoi
Isn't that much more insincere?
[06:56] Aoi
Or perhaps there's not a single
girl you're vaguely interested in?
[07:02] Tomozaki
No... that's not it...
[07:05] Aoi
I'm not telling you to run out
there and declare your love.
[07:09] Aoi
You don't even have to be certain about it.
[07:12] Aoi
Just decide who you'd like to become
closer to from now on. That's all.
SIGN Small Goal: Who do you want to get closer to?
[07:19] Tomozaki
Got it.
[07:21] Tomozaki
The girls I'm interested in
[07:24] Tomozaki
are Mimimi and Kikuchi.
[07:29] Aoi
An extremely appropriate answer, given
all your hesitation. What a letdown.
SIGN Small Goal: CLEAR! Who do you want to get closer to? Mimimi / Kikuchi
[07:36] Tomozaki
Oh, hush.
[07:38] Aoi
Okay, so starting today,
[07:40] Aoi
you'll get closer to them
on the premise of building
[07:43] Aoi
a boyfriend-girlfriend relationship.
[07:46] Tomozaki
Boyfriend... girlfriend...
[07:48] Aoi
Picture this:
[07:50] Aoi
Mimimi comes to your room,
[07:53] Aoi
and the two of you sit on your bed, alone.
[07:55] Aoi
A lot of words are exchanged,
[07:57] Aoi
your fingers are entwined...
[08:01] Aoi
Or you're with Fuka,
[08:03] Aoi
and a lot of words are exchanged,
[08:05] Aoi
your fingers are entwined...
[08:09] Aoi
Okay!
[08:11] Aoi
Looks like you got it.
[08:13] Tomozaki
Damn her...
[08:15] Aoi
Now, first up, your new goal:
SIGN New Goal: Decide which one you like
[08:19] Aoi
Decide which one you like.
[08:22] Aoi
Once you have that answer,
[08:24] Aoi
work on conveying your feelings to her.
[08:27] Aoi
Your small goal will be...
SIGN Small Goal: Complete event map (before culture festival)
[08:29] Aoi
to complete a normie romance event
map before the culture festival.
[08:35] Tomozaki
An event map?
SIGN Minami Nanami Route - Event 1 - Event 2 - Event 3 Fuka Kikuchi Route - Event 1 - Event 2 - Event 3
[08:38] Tomozaki
Like in a dating sim?
[08:43] Aoi
Hexactly!
[08:45] Aoi
And if you ultimately confess your
feelings to her and start dating,
SIGN Medium Goal: Have a girlfriend before starting year 3
[08:49] Aoi
you'll have met your medium goal.
[08:52] Tomozaki
Now hang on a second...
[08:53] Aoi
What is it?
[08:55] Mizusawa
I don't want to make confession a goal.
[08:58] Mizusawa
If I'm going to tell a girl how I feel,
[09:00] Mizusawa
it can't be for some goal or task...
[09:05] Mizusawa
it's got to be because I,
myself, want to tell her.
[09:10] Aoi
What? Are you saying that the
process is what matters here,
[09:14] Aoi
regardless of the outcome?
[09:17] Aoi
nanashi is saying this?
[09:19] Tomozaki
I do think the outcome is important, too.
[09:23] Aoi
Right? Then who cares?
[09:26] Tomozaki
nanashi's play style is all about valuing
both the process and the result.
[09:30] Tomozaki
That's how I got to be
Japan's top-ranked player.
[09:33] Tomozaki
I mean,
[09:35] Tomozaki
it's got to be more efficient to
fight that way IRL, too, right?
[09:40] Aoi
Well, if you insist, I guess, sure.
[09:45] Aoi
Okay, next we'll go into more
detail on the event map.
SIGN Small Goal: Complete event map (before culture festival)
[09:49] Tomozaki
Right.
[09:50] Aoi
I've just sent you three
events you'll need to clear.
[09:56] Aoi
First up:
SIGN Discuss what you're looking for in a dating partner
[09:58] Aoi
Discuss what you're looking
for in a dating partner.
[10:02] Tomozaki
Th-That's pretty direct...
[10:04] Aoi
Second:
SIGN Touch each others' hands on purpose for at least 5 seconds straight
[10:05] Aoi
Touch each others' hands on purpose
for at least 5 seconds straight.
[10:09] Tomozaki
Wh-What?!
[10:11] Aoi
Third:
SIGN Wear matching accessories just for you two
[10:12] Aoi
Wear matching accessories, just for you two.
[10:15] Tomozaki
Wait wait wait!
Aren't these all incredibly hard?!
[10:22] Aoi
They are. But you can do it.
[10:25] Tomozaki
Eh?
[10:26] Aoi
After all, you've managed to
complete almost every task so far.
[10:31] Aoi
Isn't that right?
[10:46] Tomozaki
Here goes.
[10:50] Mimimi
This new cheese curry on
the school lunch menu...
[10:53] Mimimi
pulling some strings as
student council prez, I see!
[10:56] Aoi
Who, me? No way!
[10:58] Mimimi
Are you sure?
[11:09] Tomozaki
Wh-What's going on?
[11:11] Aoi
What's wrong, Mimimi?
[11:14] Tomozaki
Damn. Now Hinami will see that
Mimimi's acting weird, too.
[11:27] Tomozaki
Mizusawa said we could always
just carry on as we always had,
[11:32] Tomozaki
but that's looking unlikely.
SIGN Did something happen with Mimimi? Nothing in particular
SIGN Ah. Well, as long as you're getting through those tasks of yours
[11:50] Tomozaki
First, what we're looking for in a partner...
SIGN Discuss what you're looking for in a dating partner
[11:56] Fuka
Sorry I'm late.
[11:57] Tomozaki
Whoa!
[11:59] Fuka
I-I'm sorry.
[12:01] Fuka
Did I startle you?
[12:03] Tomozaki
Oh, no... you're fine.
SIGN My Unfamiliar Way to Fly First Draft
[12:08] Tomozaki
Oh, wow!
[12:10] Tomozaki
It's like a real script!
[12:13] Fuka
Isn't it?
[12:15] Tomozaki
That was fast, though. You're done already?
[12:18] Fuka
Um, I still haven't figured
out the second half.
[12:23] Tomozaki
Oh, no?
[12:25] Fuka
But it's kind of fun, somehow.
[12:29] Fuka
I get so excited when I picture these
characters coming to life on stage.
[12:34] Fuka
And a little nervous, too.
[12:37] Tomozaki
I get it.
[12:39] Tomozaki
All those people watching
the festival stage...
[12:44] Tomozaki
Okay, I'll give this a read-through
[12:48] Tomozaki
and we'll met up again after school.
[12:50] Fuka
Thanks in advance.
[12:52] Tomozaki
Oh, um, a-actually...
[12:55] Fuka
Yes? What is it?
[12:56] Tomozaki
Well, uh...
[13:00] Fuka
What's wrong?
SIGN Discuss what you're looking for in a dating partner
[13:04] Tomozaki
Now what do I do?
[13:09] Tomozaki**
I know! If Fuka's my choice...
[13:13] Tomozaki
Earlier you said you were
trying to figure out
[13:17] Tomozaki
who the hero Libra would wind
up with at the climax, right?
[13:21] Fuka
Right. Kris or Alucia.
[13:25] Tomozaki
People who see romance as a
matter of who winds up with who
[13:29] Tomozaki
are going to be really
invested in this story.
[13:32] Fuka
Uh-huh.
[13:33] Tomozaki
So, um... if a guy and
a girl are g-going out,
[13:40] Tomozaki
what do you think their criteria should be?
[13:43] Fuka
Their criteria for choosing someone to date?
[13:46] Tomozaki
Y-Yeah. Right.
[13:50] Fuka
There's still so much I don't know...
[13:55] Fuka
But I think it probably depends on
[13:59] Fuka
what "dating" means to any given person.
[14:05] Tomozaki
What it means?
[14:07] Fuka
If someone is simply interested
in trying this "dating" thing,
[14:12] Fuka
or if a couple wants to put a name
on the relationship they share...
[14:18] Tomozaki
I see.
[14:20] Tomozaki
That probably counts for my task, anyway...
SIGN Discuss what you're looking for in a dating partner
[14:24] Tomozaki
But I'd like to take it a step further.
[14:29] Tomozaki
O-Okay, then, what does "dating"
mean for you personally?
[14:37] Fuka
Me? Personally?
[14:40] Tomozaki
Uh-huh.
[14:42] Fuka
Um...
[14:43] Fuka
Well, there's this Andi story,
"The Scissorman's Lie."
[14:49] Tomozaki
Oh, that one. The short love story
about the Scissorman and the princess.
[14:53] Fuka
Right.
SIGN The Scissorman's Lie
[14:55] Fuka
A man with scissors for hands who
hurts people without meaning to
[15:00] Fuka
gets pulled into a storybook world
and falls in love with a princess.
[15:05] Fuka
A bond gradually grows
between the lonely pair.
[15:09] Fuka
The Scissorman is the only
one for the princess,
[15:13] Fuka
and the princess is the only
one for the Scissorman.
[15:18] Fuka
I think dating might mean being able
to create that kind of relationship.
[15:24] Tomozaki
Where no one else could
take your partner's place.
[15:29] Fuka
That's right.
[15:30] Fuka
A special relationship, where no one
else will do, taking one ideal shape.
[15:38] Fuka
I think that might be what
"dating" means to me.
[15:44] Tomozaki
One ideal shape, huh?
[15:46] Tomozaki
I'll have to give that some thought myself.
[15:49] Fuka
You don't have a take on it?
[15:53] Tomozaki
Mmm... I never really thought about it.
[15:56] Fuka
Oh, I see.
[15:58] Tomozaki
But that's all the more reason I ought to
pin down my own definition of "dating."
[16:05] Fuka
Well, once you do,
please share it with me.
[16:12] Fuka
Oh! To, um... to help with
the script, that is...
[16:18] Tomozaki
A-As reference.
[16:20] Fuka
Right. As reference.
[16:28] Mizusawa
Yo, Fumiya.
[16:30] Tomozaki
What's up, Mizusawa?
[16:34] Mizusawa
Sure is awkward between you and Mimimi.
[16:36] Tomozaki
Oh, well...
[16:38] Tomozaki
you know...
[16:40] Mizusawa
This calls for drastic measures.
[16:43] Mizusawa
Let's get to lunch.
[16:44] Tomozaki
Huh?
SIGN Bottom-Tier Character Tomozaki S2
[16:53] Mimimi
Oh! Mapo bowl for you, Brain?
[16:56] Tomozaki
A-And ramen for you, Mimimi?
[17:01] Mimimi
Hey, Tomozaki?
[17:03] Tomozaki
Y-Yeah?
[17:05] Mimimi
About... About yesterday...
[17:10] Mimimi
I mean, don't worry about it too much.
[17:14] Mimimi
In fact, forget it!
[17:16] Mimimi
Or, well, not exactly.
[17:19] Mimimi
Let's just be like we always
have been... or something.
[17:23] Tomozaki
S-Sure.
[17:24] Tomozaki
Got it.
[17:28] Hanabi
Huh! Who knew?
[17:30] Mizusawa
Same goes for you, right, Aoi?
[17:32] Aoi
That's right!
[17:34] Aoi
I've had people ask if you
and I are dating, Takahiro!
[17:39] Mizusawa
Oh, yeah, those two would
make a great couple.
[17:44] Tomozaki
If you do say so yourself.
[17:46] Aoi
Actually, Tomozaki... what about you?
[17:51] Tomozaki
Um...
[17:53] Tomozaki
I can feel her pressing me to
make the most of this setting
[17:58] Tomozaki
to get my tasks over with.
[17:59] Tomozaki
M-Me?
[18:01] Aoi
Yeah! It's like you seem to have
something going on, but you don't...
[18:06] Aoi
or it seems like you don't, but you do.
[18:08] Tomozaki
Well, which is it?
[18:09] Mizusawa
Oh, he might. He was at that girls' school
culture festival, after all.
[18:15] Mizusawa
Talking to girls and everything.
[18:20] Mizusawa
I wouldn't be surprised if
something developed after that.
[18:24] Mimimi
I-Is that true, Brain?!
[18:26] Tomozaki
N-No, there's nothing!
[18:29] Mimimi
Hmm...
[18:31] Hanabi
You know, Minmi...
[18:32] Mimimi
Wh-What?
[18:34] Hanabi
You're weird today.
[18:35] Aoi
Oh, that? I thought so, too.
[18:39] Aoi
I bet she's hiding something from us!
[18:42] Mimimi
I-I wouldn't... say that...
[18:46] Tomozaki
Whoa, Mimimi—this is not the
time to be looking my way!
[18:50] Mimimi
Now, now. Setting that aside...
[18:54] Mimimi
Whoops—my ramen's gonna get soggy!
[18:57] Mimimi
Everyone eat up fast before it gets cold!
SIGN My Unfamiliar Way to Fly
[19:07] Tomozaki
"My Unfamiliar Way to Fly" went like this:
[19:13] Tomozaki
In a world where dragons
and humans lived in harmony,
[19:16] Tomozaki
there was one very special
breed of flying dragon.
[19:21] Tomozaki
Susceptible to stress and wary of humans,
[19:24] Tomozaki
the most important factor in raising them was
[19:27] Tomozaki
never exposing them to the
impurities of the world.
[19:31] Tomozaki
Libra, the locksmith's son, and Alucia,
next in line to be queen, were both 15.
[19:37] Tomozaki
They grew up together, despite
their different backgrounds.
[19:40] Tomozaki
When Libra was younger, he visited the
castle on an errand for his father,
[19:44] Tomozaki
where he met the smart and determined Alucia,
[19:47] Tomozaki
and the two became friends.
[19:49] Tomozaki
One day, while his father was working,
[19:53] Tomozaki
Alucia invited Libra to explore the castle.
[19:58] Tomozaki
Inside it was a garden they
were forbidden to enter.
[20:03] Tomozaki
Out of curiosity, the two went in.
[20:07] Tomozaki
There before them was a pure-white
dragon with huge wings
[20:12] Tomozaki
and Kris, a young girl who knew
nothing of the outside world.
[20:17] Tomozaki
Kris had been abandoned
outside the castle as a baby,
[20:22] Tomozaki
and was also 15 years old.
[20:24] Tomozaki
She lived here, apart from the world,
to serve as the dragon keeper.
[20:30] Tomozaki
Neither she nor the dragons
were permitted to have contact
[20:32] Tomozaki
with any humans who weren't royalty.
[20:37] Tomozaki
The king sentenced Libra to death for
having entered the forbidden garden.
[20:43] Tomozaki
But Alucia confronted her father,
the king, with a hard truth:
[20:49] Tomozaki
the king had illegitimate children
hidden throughout the kingdom.
[20:55] Tomozaki
Alucia bluffed that Libra
was one of these children,
[20:58] Tomozaki
making him royalty—and her brother.
[21:04] Tomozaki
And if Libra were royalty, he
couldn't contaminate the dragons.
[21:10] Tomozaki
Not wanting his dirty little
secret to go public,
[21:14] Tomozaki
the king vacated Libra's sentence,
[21:17] Tomozaki
and Libra was charged with caring for Kris.
[21:25] Tomozaki
Um...
[21:27] Tomozaki
I enjoyed it.
[21:29] Fuka
Y-You did? Really?!
[21:31] Tomozaki
Uh-huh. It felt a lot like the way
it did when I read the story itself.
[21:36] Fuka
Thank goodness...
[21:39] Fuka
Um, w-would you say you
had any concerns so far?
[21:44] Tomozaki
Hmm...
[21:46] Tomozaki
Maybe the characters?
[21:48] Fuka
The characters?
[21:50] Tomozaki
They feel... more ordinary now, or something.
[21:53] Tomozaki
I'm sure the story is easier
to understand this way,
[21:56] Tomozaki
but it's like there's
something off about them.
[22:00] Fuka
Maybe so...
[22:02] Fuka
I actually did change the concept a little.
[22:06] Fuka
I simplified the characters to make it
easier for everyone to play the various parts.
[22:11] Fuka
But in making them easier to understand,
they may have become more broadly drawn.
[22:17] Tomozaki
Ah, I see.
[22:19] Tomozaki
Her short stories are strong on portraying
the characters' fine details,
[22:24] Tomozaki
the particular ways they think,
even their inconsistent feelings.
[22:27] Tomozaki
That was a big part of its charm.
[22:30] Fuka
I thought I'd do without complex emotions
[22:32] Fuka
and bring straightforward
thoughts to the forefront.
[22:37] Tomozaki
But I feel like that weakened
the sense I had before
[22:40] Tomozaki
that these were living,
breathing characters.
[22:43] Fuka
Can I keep on writing this as is?
[22:48] Tomozaki
I... I think you should go
back the original characters.
[22:55] Tomozaki
It might make them harder to perform,
[22:58] Tomozaki
and it might be hard for you to
get that across in just dialogue.
[23:04] Tomozaki
But...
[23:05] Tomozaki
I think that way is absolutely
more interesting.
[23:10] Fuka
All right, understood. I'll give it a try.
[23:16] Tomozaki
Way too much happened today.
[23:19] Tomozaki**
I feel like my head's going to pop.
[23:22] Tomozaki
What should I be thinking about?
[23:25] Tomozaki
What should I do?
[23:27] Tomozaki
What does "dating" mean?
[23:29] Tomozaki
And if I ever find out...
[23:32] Tomozaki
who will I most want to be with,
[23:35] Tomozaki
Mimimi or Kikuchi?
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